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Blackshadow
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« Thread Started on Jan 5, 2009, 4:20pm » | ![[Quote]](http://i272.photobucket.com/albums/jj188/Bay9747/Revampedv2/quote.gif) |
Username: Schelanpup
Nickname: Blackshadow
Dragon Name: BalckMoon
Type: Dark
Rank: King
Gender: Male
Age: 24
Personality: A dragon who is familiar to the clan. He doesn't know what true love is, because he's never been in love. Until he finds a partner, he likes to be alone. He'll help the clan or friends when it's needed. He's a little bit stubborn, and is pretty good at winning word fights.
History: BlackMoon was born into the dark side by his father who was a prince. After the king died, BlackMoon's father was murdered by an Light dragon, which made him king at a younger age. BlackMoon made an oath to obliterate all of the Light dragons for his father. Whether they came for peace, or for war, they would be killed. After that, he hated fighting and wouldn't do it, unless necessary. He has the ability to breath fire.
Appearance: http://www.gamerdna.com/public/images/us....lack_dragon.jpg
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He is what he is... Blackshadow:
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MalviryHeart
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I WILL PROTECT.... and I shall defend
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« Reply #1 on Jan 5, 2009, 4:41pm » | |
The personality is a little on the short side. Put a few more sentences in their, get to at least five. Also for type and gender just put both down, I understand you are just trying to fill us in but it would be an easier read if it just said fire for type, and male for gender. The history is fine, although I'm not sure what silv wants to do about BurningStar as prince now that GoldenMoon is no longer on the site. If there is anyway you can add something in about him it would be appreciated. Also currently their are no water dragons, but if you could go into more detail about it I could pass it off as a group of dragons who use water but aren't a part of any kingdom. I or any other member of the site will be happy to help you with this.
The reason I made it SwyMoon is because thats what kings have as a surname. Moon.
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xX-SilverMoon-Xx
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To serve and protect my kingdom. Thats what I must do...
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« Reply #2 on Jan 8, 2009, 6:03pm » | |
Ok you need to wait on the King position, and I will need to talk to MalviryHear about this.
And on the water dragons, they are actually a part of The Ice kingdom, since i ce dragons are pretty much both ice 'n' water.
And can you change your name to a more apropriate one? "Swy" wouldn't be within a dragons vocabulary.
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xX-SilverMoon-Xx
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To serve and protect my kingdom. Thats what I must do...
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Karma: 8,388,607 | | Re: Swy
« Reply #3 on Apr 16, 2009, 8:29pm » | |
I have to say that it is accepted!
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